Holding Hands With Destiny

My first brush with death was not my own. 

Not this time, at 11 years young. 

No, my personal rub came a bit later... 

down a different lane. 

Not this dirt path I currently found myself traversing.

Happily kicking up dust bowls, 

scattering small rocks 

and breathing deeply 

what would soon be a sticky September day. 

Central Florida, take it or leave it, 

did funky things with my hair 

making me wonder if my pale, freckled skin 

didn't hide a richer, dare-I-whisper-

darker

blood deep within.

Pondering that and the soundtrack to Footloose

in my ever-whirling brain, 

I shifted the weight of my backpack 

And brushed at a fly who played games with my slightly upturned nose. 

That's when I heard it.

The rustle. 

A faint crunch 

of dried leaves.

Sadie! 

She's been missing for days, 

the black mixed-mutt of grandma's.

The dog I loved-to-love 

each time I visited 

this far-away space. 

Only now wasn't a vaca, 

but a home, 

dare I say.

And Sadie,

the only one 

who could truly make it 

feel that way.

Gone missing. 

Like I often desired to do.

I halted. 

Dust coating my already filthy 

Converse tennis-shoes. 

Ears perked, 

Tuning into the sound.

Any sound.

Even as I tuned out 

the racing of my own thumping heart. 

A flood of feels hit me hard. 

JOY, 

Elation. 

Found her!

Dismay

As she wasn't running my way.

"Sadie," I whispered, a little-girl shout. 

And it came again, 

Distinct

Yet, slight.

A rustling of, 

no, not leaves.

Wrong side of these here metaphoric tracks.  

I creeped out from under the canopy 

of moss-dripping branches. 

Arching under the weight 

in picturesque splendor 

over the country dirt lane. 

The field. 

"Sadie!" I moved forward,

single-minded intent.

Uncaring of the passing of time,

I tore through the crushed row of corn. 

Refusing to suck into the vortex 

Of nerves and excitement, 

The extra pounding in my heart,

I raced chest-first, 

my steps masking any other sounds.

"Sadie!"

I tripped, hard. 

Eating bone-dry dirt. 

Hands gripping fallen husks, 

battered ears of what would soon be bi-colored corn,

I took a beat to adjust…

To suddenly being prone.

The weight of books on my back, 

Crushing my spine,
Pressed me deep

Into that no-moisture-in-sight 

ground. 

Feeling the tentacle of pain radiate up my foot, 

I drew in a shuddering breath.

The sting of tears hit, 

A burning fire one palm, 

I sucked in another

shaky inhale of –

Insert full-body scream 

even as my brain yelled, 

Fuck!

Don't think at 11, I didn't yet know that word. 

Come on now.

I'd screamed it at The Mother that winter,

Or was it summer,

I was 9. 

I knew it intimately. 

I saw the buttons it pushed. 

I loved it completely

Those four little letters

That could get a reaction

Quicker than a match can catch fire.

Words,
I discovered early on

Had power.

And in this second, 

eyes no longer capable of blinking,

Frozen wide,

it's what came to mind 

Yet again...

As I took in the black mound before me.

Fuck.

The blood, 

There was blood.

Not a puddle, 

But enough that I instinctively knew 

So not good. 

But even as I felt this was bad, 

Very-very-bad, 

I felt bone-crushing relief flood me gut-deep. 

This black leather-skin was not my Sadie... 

But a human being... 

And by the looks of things, 

he, she, it

Was quite possibly dead

Favoring my right foot, 

I crawled to my knees, 

One dirty hand smearing the tears 

I couldn’t stop from streaming unchecked 

down my baby-fat cheeks...

Should I stay or should I go now?

I'd heard that anthem somewhere.

A tune now played on red-alert in my mind. 

The beat of my heart keeping dedicated time. 

Shock wearing off, 

Like I'd stripped out of a too-tight shirt,

I leaned back....  

And took it all in. 

A man. 

Had to be. 

He was long.

Laying on his back, 

As though stargazing, 

But the stars had long been chased by a coming dawn. 

I heard the engine and didn't even bother to make a run for that bus. 

This was better than a ride to school.

Better than a day in a classroom. 

Even if the sight before me 

scared me 

more than my recent 

first day at a brand new 

black vs white school. 

I shrugged out of my backpack

And pulled down my shirt, 

Wondering if I should run back to grandma's 

And scream out 911.

 

I slowly crawled to my feet, 

Thinking it time to bolt.
Looking anywhere but down I saw it then.

The bike.

A big beast of metal laying on it’s side. 

The helmet just behind me. 

The thing that had tripped me

Clearly in plain sight. 

Well, that ain't good. 

Yes, an 11 year old's inner voice can be downright sarcastic. 

Give it not another thought because the only thing that mattered was what came next.

Is he even breathing?

Should I check or should I go now? 

My mind hummed as I switched out words to accommodate.

I inched closer, 

Wincing at the pain in my foot 

But sucked it up as what he'd be feeling…

Had he still been breathing– 

That's when I heard the unforgettable sound...

A rattle. 

Not that from a baby 

or a snake.. 

This came from a-deep... 

Raising all the little hairs... 

And causing my breath to catch on a sucked-up intake. 

Hold it.

Don't move. 

Deer in headlights moment if ever there was one. 

Oh poor doe, I now know how you feel. 

Glad to not be in a spotlight, 

I inched my self back.

Slowly.

Carefully.

So as not to disturb the,

shit, 

non-dead.

Stepping that throbbing right foot over the fire-engine red 

Plastic, was it? 

Thinking how stupid a color. 

I couldn't stop the pained inhale as I put my weight down. 

Starting to turn. 

"Don't... 

go..."

Never, as long as I live, 

Would I forget those barely-there words... 

The rasp, 

Imagined or real,

I know not, 

All I know is that I stopped. 

And took in all of him... 

Never ending legs, a simple gash on one thigh... 

The jacket, all black 

Zippers, now gleaming, 

Catching the sun's eye. 

His face was next... 

Of course, 

as that's how the body unfolds... 

But I admit I wasn't keen on seeing anything mangled... 

So gasped when all I saw was a simple red scratch,

a thick beard and startlingly thunder-cloud eyes. 

Those eyes seared through me,

Lightning bolt quick,

Called me, 

even as his hand moved.

Two of his four 

Fingers that is... 

They gave an inch-worm wiggle.

And I knew beyond a shadow of a doubt 

that that there gesture 

was a beckoning. 

A calling. 

His final shout out.

And I obeyed,

no thought.

Real inch-worms freaked me the f*ck out.

But him..?

I stumbled forward. 

Sank to my already-skinned knees

And grabbed those two fingers 

As though they were my lifeline,

Not I, his. 

That rattle shook

And I didn't back away. 

I felt it deep within and knew I had to simply 

stay. 

"Thank–"

A single tear raced a hot path down my cheek matching the one pooling in his. 

His eyes were stormy-clear.

His gaze, laser-focused. 

I found my voice. As that’s what you do. Introduce me to you. 

"I'm..."

"...angel."

At any other time, a snort would have been my reply,

but who was I to deny.

So I sat and held hands with death... 

On a muggy start of a brand-new-day. 

I shared a story, 

long after the light faded 

not from the sky

but from those burned-into-my-memory eyes... 

I sang to him, 

Amazing Grace... 

Figuring a Footloose soundtrack hit

not the best choice... 

Suddenly thankful the music, at least,

made those hard pews,

Fire and brimstone preaching

Plus, all the hoop-la

worth my Sundays…

And Wednesday nights.

But later, when humming... 

"Holding on for a hero till the morning light…”

I knew he'd always be my hero,

as he showed me no fear... 

in the face of 

His demise. 

And even as the last breath left him,

he remained. 

Watching over me

Watching over him. 

I heard it.

A whisper of wind. 

I felt it... 

The rustle of air on the back of my neck 

In the stillness of the dead-less-air day... 

"Mateo..."

His parting gift... 

A name? 

His name? 

It mattered not... 

For his true gift was showing me

his light, 

his essence 

him... 

As he emerged, tall 

In a kaleidoscope of all the colors

A song of all the sounds

And smiled. 

I stayed... 

he faded.

I stayed,

holding his solid fingers in mine

even as they grew cool... 

And felt the warm of him radiate  

down

over

through

all 

of

me.

They found me.

Farmers.

They wanted to move me.

I bared my teeth.

An image of poor-missing Sadie

my guide. 

One stayed. 

Watching.

Watchful.

One left. 

Nervous.

Then came the lights.

Red and blue. 

All

the

noise.

Disturbing what was.

Pulled away, I was.

He, taken away. 

Wrapped in a hug. 

A blanket. I was.

Him, not so much. 

But I held on...

To the truth within

I knew something profound 

Had shaken loose

A part of me. 

As I was led away, 

I heard a man say, 

"Mateo..."

And I turned,

Smiled. 

His name...

Years later, 

that word rung in my head...

Over and over and over again…

Holding on for a hero
played through my radio 

one too many times. 

And I knew.

I must have been 16 at the time.

Google not yet a thing, 

but I was resourceful...

And found a way…

Mateo, 

God's Gift. 

The power of a signal word

Whispered from beyond

Time.

Space.

Place. 

💜


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Jill R. Stevens

I am an author, a coach, a newly blooming goddess, and aserial entrepreneur. Words and I have always engaged in an intimate dance, and through the art of stories I share big ideas, offer pause-worthy mind-edibles, and drip what many would call “life advice”...but I simply call it truth. My truth. If it resonates with you, stick around, have a look-see. And if it doesn’t, no harm, no foul. Some people say I’m woo woo. Other people say my words changed their life. Read on and decide for yourself.

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